“The Scorpion Departs but Never Returns”: An Elegiac-Patriotic Slideshow inspired by Phil Ochs

This is a slideshow I originally posted on the “50 Phil Ochs Fans Can’t Be Wrong”  group on Facebook, then on The Daily Kos, but it has garnered so much positive response (for me, anyway, so the bar is pretty low), that I thought I would post it here. It is sort of appropriate for the upcoming July 4th holiday, although it is more marked by a tone of elegiac doom than celebratory patriotism (Memorial Day would have been more appropriate, but I just finished it yesterday morning). I have found out some interesting stuff from the numerous responses I have gotten. As one of my Facebook respondents pointed out, Phil had an earlier song on another submarine disaster (the USS Thresher) that appears on his “All the News thats Fit to Sing” album. Also, according to one of my Daily Kos respondents, it was written in the key of D minor, and I must say the effect is still incredibly haunting, and I’m sure I’ve listened to it more than a hundred times.

This slideshow inspired by one of Phil’s most evocative and moving songs, “The Scorpion Departs but Never Returns” (from his “Rehearsals for Retirement” album. Actually, it wasn’t until fairly recently that I learned it was based on an actual event, the disappearance of the nuclear submarine the U.S.S. Scorpion (SSN-589) on May 22, 1968, about three months before Phil went to Chicago. I was nine years old at the time, but passionately interested in news and politics, although I have to admit I have no memory of hearing about submarine’s disappearance at the time (1968 was a very busy and rather horrific year). Although there have been lots of theories, many designed to stoke cold war hysteria and increase public support for the ever-expanding military industrial complex, apparently the sub imploded because it went too deep. As the Scorpion’s nickname among some of her crew members was “scrapiron,”and she apparently had not been fully serviced, I suspect structural deficiencies had something to do with it. The audio at the end of the video, after Phil’s song concludes, is the audio record of the implosion (the first boom is the actual implosion, followed by a series of diminishing echoes). If I am reading the recording correctly (posted above), everybody on board basically died within two seconds, probably crushed by the implosion rather than drowning (of course, this was not public knowledge when Phil wrote the song).

I have tried to do justice to the pathos of the terrible loss of life of the tragedy, and the suffering of the sailor’s surviving friends and relations, while also trying to illustrate how Phil was using his poetic imagination to transform the incident into a means to explore his own growing depression, before being pretty much tipped into the abyss by the tear gas and riot sticks of August. Hope you like it.

 

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  1. Sailors climb the tree, up the terrible tree
    Where are my shipmates have they sunk beneath the sea?
    I do not know much, but I know this cannot be
    It isn’t really, it isn’t really,
    Tell me it isn’t really.
    Sounding bell is diving down the water green
    Not a trace, not a toothbrush, not a cigarette was seen
    Bubble ball is rising from a whisper or a scream
    But I’m not screaming, no I’m not screaming,
    Tell me I’m not screaming.
    Captain will not say how long we must remain
    The phantom ship forever sail the sea
    It’s all the same.
    Captain my dear Captain we’re staying down so long
    I have been a good man, I’ve done nobody wrong
    Have we left our ladies for the lyrics of a song?
    That I’m not singing, I’m not singing
    Tell me I’m not singing
    The schooner ship is sliding across the kitchen sink
    My son and my daughter they won’t know what to think
    The crew has turned to voting and the officers to drink
    But I’m not drinking, no I’m not drinking
    Tell me I’m not drinking
    Captain will not say how long we must remain
    The phantom ship forever sail the sea
    It’s all the same.
    The radio is begging them to come back to the shore
    All will be forgiven, it’ll be just like before
    All you’ve ever wanted will be waiting by your door
    We will forgive you, we will forgive you
    Tell me we will forgive you
    But no one gives an answer not even one goodbye
    Oh, the silence of their sinking is all that they reply
    Some have chosen to decay and other chose to die
    But I’m not dying, no I’m not dying
    Tell me I’m not dying
    Captain will not say how long we must remain
    The phantom ship forever sail the sea
    It’s all the same.
    Songwriter: Phil Ochs.

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